One of my writing exams

Hello guys!

Since I've got nothing creative for writing to you today I'm going to share a writing that I've made so hope you found it interesting

PART 1: Influence on young people and effect on participants of TV shows.

There's a huge variety of TV shows, such as reality and talent shows; it's said that this programs can have a great impact on participants and young people.

Talking about the influence of the programs children, people say that they can be really affected, in the other hand, it's said that in fact these shows are complete harmless; on my personal opinion I think that this depends on: what are this programs about, if the teen or the child is going to watch it in the company of their parents, and if the program is adequate for the age of the child, and I think that this could be used for the effect on participants too.

Of course if a TV show is about sexuality it is needed for the parents to be there with their children so they can explain the topic to them, or if the program has been classified as rank "C" then it's supposed that a 10 year-old boy shouldn't watch it, and if the participants have to be in a competition they'll be under pressure, but there are some shows that can't be absolutely true because they would have legal problems like "La Isla".

To sum up, in my point of view, all the effects of the TV shows on the audience and the participants depends on what's the sow about, and who is the audience, basing on this things we can say if the effect is something bad or just healthy entertainment.